I hope that amuses someone.
Here’s the script :
M : what took you so long? I’ve been waiting for hours.
F : Liar, you just called me 15 mins ago to tell me you just reached. What’s the hurry anyways? You that hungry?
M : of course I’m hungry, can we go? Now?
F : alright alright, how was your day at work anyways? You look tired.
M : Oh. It was just dandy. You know running around the city slaving for my boss. Highlight of my day was when I got to smoke. Just one ciggarette. High light. Get it?
F : very funny. Ha ha. Wait. Since when did you smoke? I thought You quit? For our baby? When the hell did you start smoking again?
M : Ala…it was just one only…
F : One only?what kind of an excuse is that?
M : I had it at work. Not now. Now when you were around. Ok? C’mon, let’s just get a table.
F : Fine. Still you had a smoke.
M : Let’s order. What do you want?
One Comment
Well written dialogue, although it doesn’t quite get tense enough when you had the chance to inject tension during the bit where she was confronting him about smoking again.