Comments for say hello to sunshine. http://braversoldier.wordpress.com stop me if you think that you've heard this one before. Wed, 02 Jan 2008 03:48:50 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Dialogue by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-23 theredpants Wed, 02 Jan 2008 03:48:50 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/dialogue/#comment-23 Well written dialogue, although it doesn’t quite get tense enough when you had the chance to inject tension during the bit where she was confronting him about smoking again. Well written dialogue, although it doesn’t quite get tense enough when you had the chance to inject tension during the bit where she was confronting him about smoking again.

]]> Comment on T/F by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-22 theredpants Wed, 12 Dec 2007 09:04:07 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-22 The 2nd story is too general and lacks specific details so I’d have to go with the 1st one as true. The 2nd story is too general and lacks specific details so I’d have to go with the 1st one as true.

]]> Comment on Letter To The Past by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/letter-to-the-past/#comment-21 theredpants Wed, 12 Dec 2007 09:02:19 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/letter-to-the-past/#comment-21 This piece lacks detail of what kind of person you were when this took place in contrast to what kind of person you are now This piece lacks detail of what kind of person you were when this took place in contrast to what kind of person you are now

]]> Comment on Visual Trigger by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/visual-trigger/#comment-20 theredpants Wed, 12 Dec 2007 08:58:18 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/visual-trigger/#comment-20 A very good try at Greek tragedy. You almost got it. However, it would be more of a Greek tragedy if Eddy had slept with Lisa and Bianca and then found out that he was related to them or something like that. A very good try at Greek tragedy. You almost got it. However, it would be more of a Greek tragedy if Eddy had slept with Lisa and Bianca and then found out that he was related to them or something like that.

]]> Comment on T/F by bobbingforapples http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-16 bobbingforapples Thu, 29 Nov 2007 14:16:17 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-16 first definitely! first definitely!

]]> Comment on T/F by jumpjoy http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-15 jumpjoy Thu, 29 Nov 2007 07:21:08 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/tf/#comment-15 first one is true, im sure :) cheh. confident a-hole siaaaaaaa :D first one is true, im sure :) cheh. confident a-hole siaaaaaaa :D

]]> Comment on 50 x 5 by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/50-x-5/#comment-14 theredpants Thu, 22 Nov 2007 10:21:14 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/50-x-5/#comment-14 Very good stories! They are well-written, interesting and bold. Made me want to read more – good control of words and the language. Very good stories! They are well-written, interesting and bold. Made me want to read more – good control of words and the language.

]]> Comment on OPENERS. by theredpants http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-13 theredpants Thu, 22 Nov 2007 10:18:17 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/openers/#comment-13 Good openers. Varied and interesting. Most have potential for good stories. Now, you just gotta watch that past tense, okay? Good openers. Varied and interesting. Most have potential for good stories. Now, you just gotta watch that past tense, okay?

]]> Comment on People Watch (: by D. http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/pw/#comment-12 D. Thu, 15 Nov 2007 15:25:00 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/pw/#comment-12 <i>wayyy</i> freaky. + seriously? ok, i think we have diff styles of reading into characters because when i analysed characters, i always thought (and still think) that they are either a)gay b)emo or c)crazy while you always came up with something i'd never thought of when s.hoe asked you. So-we can't really compare our 'skills'.haha. gah. bloody <i>susheela</i> will haunt me for the rest of my life (along with viola and sebastian) wayyy freaky.

+ seriously? ok, i think we have diff styles of reading into characters because when i analysed characters, i always thought (and still think) that they are either
a)gay
b)emo or
c)crazy

while you always came up with something i’d never thought of when s.hoe asked you.

So-we can’t really compare our ’skills’.haha.

gah. bloody susheela will haunt me for the rest of my life (along with viola and sebastian)

]]> Comment on People Watch (: by braversoldier http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/pw/#comment-11 braversoldier Wed, 14 Nov 2007 13:17:00 +0000 http://braversoldier.wordpress.com/pw/#comment-11 oh man. that's keenans'. i got the goose pimples when he mentioned OCD. freaky coincidence. okay. weird. and hey..the what you call 'delving deep into the human psyche' thing..you were good at it..you did better than me most times. oh man.

that’s keenans’.

i got the goose pimples when he mentioned OCD.

freaky coincidence.

okay. weird.

and hey..the what you call ‘delving deep into the human psyche’ thing..you were good at it..you did better than me most times.

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