Not too sure if I’m suppose to. But I gave them titles.

Boy/Girl

I see the boy everyday on the bus to school, We always smile at each other as though we share a secret. But today a girl sits in his usual seat. I worry for the boy who’s seat has been taken. The girl smiles at me. She is the boy.

Keep Quiet.

Jules has a secret that she cannot share with her best friend, Jack. They argue about Jules not being able to share it. Jack is persistent and hires a private investigator to follow her. On her birthday Jules murders the private investigator and Jack when he finds out the secret.

Karma

Everyday he orders the same drink. “Quart Venti Caramel Macchiato please.”

He always pays with a ten dollar bill and drops the ninety-five cents coin change into the tipbox.

Today he doesn’t only say please but also “I would like to have”.

And he paid with a hundred dollar bill.

Perspective.

I start by crawling. Then I stumble. Soon afterwards, I walk. Now is my all-time favourite; running. I like they way I breathe when I’m running. Sitting in this chair and closing my eyes. I feel I’m flying. Running is still favourite. I like to feel the ground beneath me.

Mistake?

I see a little girl crying in a car. Her face turns blue. I try to open the door but can’t. I yell for help. A man comes and smashes the window with a softball bat, unlocks the door and carries the girl out. Girl is rescued. Man is hero.

And as always, I hope they’re alright. (:

2 Comments

    • blahniks
    • Posted November 2, 2007 at 7:19 pm
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    I really like the first story! So unexpected!

    • theredpants
    • Posted November 22, 2007 at 6:21 pm
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    Very good stories! They are well-written, interesting and bold. Made me want to read more – good control of words and the language.


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